big B flat minor talk
big B flat minor talk bird with crest, perched on tall grass beside zephyrswept clean reservoir,undulating.sang a little and darted into undergrowth.looking for something, anythingto make it tick,like...
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A--- i called your Toilet Incident a poem of uncanny brilliance and now, a poem of rough pomp and self-questioning revelry. A Mountain Revelry To wash and rinse our souls of their age-old sorrows, We...
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most intelligent conversation ever had or will have. a very good line, in its brevity--like telegram-speak to whomever has ears to ear. This poem works because it all feels genuine, and untrammelled,...
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It's not reasonable to expect a reader to devote time and thought to something that is so carelessly written. Before we can even consider this as a poem, we have to see some competence in such basic...
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Yes, it seems like it would be an ideal world, in which an editor would take this in hand and fix all the errors. But isn't it like some new golden age to think such might exist? I dunno. I swing both...
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big B flat minor talk bird with crest, perched on tall grass beside zephyr swept clean reservoir, undulating. sang a little and darted into undergrowth. looking for something, anything to make it...
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thnaks Osal-will print up to work out any mistakes.And thanks Bernie-will reply later.
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here is new version-after had crit thing big B flat minor talk bird with crest, perched on tall grass beside zephyr-swept clean reservoir, undulating. sang a little and darted into undergrowth....
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